Loomis Study- Trick Stuff

I'm now onto another section of the Loomis book, in which he gives insight into some 'trick stuff'. This includes another technique to draw faces. So here is my stab at the first head using this 'trick'. It went okay, but I prefer my first attempt, on the left, over my second attempt, on the right- that one seems more faithful to the original head then the one on the right.